
That Wordy Girl
You know, that girl with a dreamy far off look and her nose stuck in a book. Here to spread that good word (wink wink)
My name is Lauren Parisi (AKA That Wordy Girl)
You know, that girl with a dreamy far off look and her nose stuck in a book. Here to spread that good word (wink wink)
Manuscript Critiques
I trained with Merphy Napier to offer a detailed manuscript critique to authors where I go through and add my reactions, predictions, and general positive feedback about what's working, as well as the critiques. The critiques will consist of making in-text comments, and looking for areas of improvement including plot, structure, pacing, character development and motivation, narrative prose, clunky dialogue, plot holes/inconsistencies, and examples of how I think you could make scenes stronger.
Lectures and Workshops
As much as I love reading and writing, I love sharing my knowledge just as much!

“Right now, I say we all have two options: we can face the fires and be tempered or turn our back and get dull.”
As much as a reader, I am an avid writer. Looking for my published work, writing samples, or freelancing?
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